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A Fathers Love
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kayyield
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First time this has ever happened, but the ending confused me. I am not sure what happened.
Question:
John, Do you think you will ever get married again? Maybe to a nice colorful lady.
Question:
John, Do you think you will ever get married again? Maybe to a nice colorful lady.
kayyield- Posts : 819
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I really hate this Chapter. It sets up stuff for later but without that stuff your right this chapter is confusing. But the end is a call back to Chapter 8 and the little boy John met at the picnic. The little boy who is now Raven's Boy Friend.
Thank you for the question.
Thank you for the question.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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OK! Got it. Sorry for making you explain it.
Went back and read chapter 8 and looked until I found Raven the babysitter.
Went back and read chapter 8 and looked until I found Raven the babysitter.
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kayyield- Posts : 819
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Don't worry about it. That is why I'm here. And I'm sorry I didn't realize you forgot Raven, otherwise I would of told you what Chapter she was in. She was mentioned in a number of chapters but was only in Ch 45.
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I like your new avatar!!
kayyield- Posts : 819
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Thank you. The Rays are out of the playoffs this year so I wanted to start to get ready for Halloween.
Buster, Crystal, and the The Evan's House are now on The Exchange.
Buster, Crystal, and the The Evan's House are now on The Exchange.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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I wanted to share this scary family pic glitch with you. Also remind everyone that this is the last chance to get in 1st anniversary questions.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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First Anniversary page is now up.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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JourneyG wrote:I wanted to share this scary family pic glitch with you. Also remind everyone that this is the last chance to get in 1st anniversary questions.
OMG! That is a creepy picture!
kayyield- Posts : 819
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Journey, love the way you used the chapter titles to summarize the story so far.
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Thank you so much. I wish I had thought of it sooner so I had more time to work on the summery but I was very happy with how it came out.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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Wow! That John sure does move fast!
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ha ha Only when he knows what he wants.
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I apologize there just is not going to be a chapter today. It was not the best week in the world and I just could not get into John's head. I'm hoping for a new chapter
Next Saturday.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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No worries. We'll be waiting to read it whenever its ready.
kayyield- Posts : 819
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kayyield wrote:No worries. We'll be waiting to read it whenever its ready.
I hate writers block. I think the only thing worse is the feeling I'm letting some readers down. So thank you for the support.
I'm still trying to wright the next chapter. I know what I want to happen but it is not working. Maybe something else needs to happen, at this point I'm not sure anymore.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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I'm sorry that the writing is not coming easily for you right now. You'll get it.
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I'm gone for a while and miss a whole bunch of stuff! Way to go John!
Katt- Posts : 182
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I'm still around. I spilled something on my keyboard so I'm on my phone writing this. I'm in the middle of writing another short story, I'm hoping when I'm done with that I'll have an idea for this.
FYI I am not getting seasons at this time.
FYI I am not getting seasons at this time.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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I'm not getting seasons right away either. I still need to get Supernatural. Is your new short story sims related?
kayyield- Posts : 819
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Getting another EP so soon is just crazy for me. And out of the two of them I was always more excited for Supernatural. Though I do look forward to adding Halloween aka Spooky Day to my game one day.
No the short story is not sim related it is just a bad idea I need out of my head.
No the short story is not sim related it is just a bad idea I need out of my head.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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I'm so excited. Thanks to Black Friday I was able to get a great deal on Seasons and Thanks to Cyber Monday I was able to get John and the boys some new toys. I'm hoping Seasons comes soon because Weather inspired Ch 55. But till then I'm going to work on getting Ch 54 out. Hopefully it will be out by Saturday. Thank you so much for your patients. Belief me I hate Writers block as much as you do.
JourneyG- Posts : 753
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At long last Ch 54: The Next Chapter
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Uh oh! This could be so bad for the boys. Or it could be so good. Glad you got your inspiration back.
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